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Post by F e n i on Oct 16, 2006 21:26:37 GMT -4
I love it! ;__;
There's just one thing that's irking me, and that's because I'm the grammatical freak that I am. So you can ignore this if you please. There were two instances, one in the poem, and one in the thing at the end, when you used 'your' instead of 'you're' -sweatdrops-
But overall, it's lovely
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Post by ztejas on Oct 16, 2006 21:27:49 GMT -4
Really? I'll have to check, I'm a gramar freak too and I proofread it like a bijillion times. Though I will check again.
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I only used your once in the poem....The other time is after the poem and it is the proper grammar. Though there were parts that needed to be edited..again.
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Post by F e n i on Oct 16, 2006 21:31:34 GMT -4
Yeah -sheepish grin-
"If your down here congrats, you read my longest poem yet."
Is your supposed to be you are? xD
And the one up there it was like "your back again"
You are back again?
I'm just trying to make sure you and I are on the same wavelength? I could be wrong -shrugs-
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Post by ztejas on Oct 16, 2006 21:42:15 GMT -4
At the bottom it can go either way, but in the poem you are right. I will change it right now, and yes we're on the same wavelength.
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Post by F e n i on Oct 16, 2006 21:48:33 GMT -4
=D -huggles-
Huggles are good for the soul. Like chicken soup xD
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Post by ztejas on Oct 17, 2006 0:05:33 GMT -4
lol, I like chicken soup....
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Post by Molly on Oct 18, 2006 17:17:50 GMT -4
I was thinking it being off topic XP
Sorry Zach, I'll delete my post like a good girl should.
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Post by F e n i on Oct 18, 2006 17:20:20 GMT -4
Want me to delete like all of them then? o-
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Post by Molly on Oct 18, 2006 17:21:36 GMT -4
No, I deleted the ones that had to do with books.
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Post by ztejas on Oct 18, 2006 17:47:01 GMT -4
Thanks guys.
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Post by F e n i on Oct 18, 2006 17:47:42 GMT -4
No problem
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Post by ztejas on Oct 29, 2006 2:18:36 GMT -4
Poem number four is closer to my heart than any other. So if ever there is one you read, read "She Is".
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Post by Molly on Oct 29, 2006 7:45:05 GMT -4
Zach, that's a lovley poem...
I wrote one, but it's not very good as poems should be.
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Post by ztejas on Oct 29, 2006 12:18:25 GMT -4
Poems don't have to be good, it's the fact that you created it that makes it worth reading.
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Post by Molly on Oct 30, 2006 18:19:27 GMT -4
Fine, can I PM you the poem?
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Post by ztejas on Oct 31, 2006 1:21:49 GMT -4
Yes you may.
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Post by Molly on Oct 31, 2006 7:32:34 GMT -4
Nevermind, I don't want to!
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Post by ztejas on Oct 31, 2006 20:19:17 GMT -4
Ok.....0_o
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Post by Molly on Oct 31, 2006 20:47:48 GMT -4
It's too sloppy, it has no feeling to me.
I can barley call it a poem...
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Post by ztejas on Nov 11, 2006 2:51:44 GMT -4
I got rid of some poems that had obvious plagerism. Don't fret, I wrote one of my own for the first time in a while.
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